Tuesday, February 3, 2026

It's just a simple line, I can still hear it all the time


 

Keegan felt as if all eyes were on him. Like they could see the real guy that he was.

OK, so he was a loner. And he didn't know why he was there. Couldn't a guy go for a walk wherever he wanted? Even at night?

The interrogation was brutal. It was as if he'd done something wrong instead of saving someone from a burning car.

"Was there anyone else?" The question felt like it was on repeat. It was as if they were trying to break him. But Keegan always came back with a furious NO. He had a bad cough now. He coughed into his forearm. His throat was scratchy, and a continuous nose drip with no relief in sight.

"I don't know anything, I swear." He practically blinked tears, but he faced them. Tired and a little shaky.

Finally, someone brought him a bag of fastfood. That was the place the president only ate when he was traveling, which came to Keegan's mind. Imagining the President might have bought this meal for him, but there was no fish sandwich. He wished there had been a fish sandwich.

Keegan kept wondering if they were going to haul him off to some unknown country. Really, he didn't go out anymore. He hadn't even started back to the University. He'd decided if he was going to continue on in economics, it would be online classes from a University back East. He was staying at his grandmother's house. 

Did they know how hard it was to get Internet out here? Yeah, like that didn't matter. Nothing about him mattered. It was just questions about the girl.

He bit into the burger it was soggy and too sweet for his tastes. He couldn't seem to swallow. So he pushed in a few fries to get the thing down.

"When did you first notice the car being there?"

Keegan blew a breath. He thought they'd been through this. "A couple of times. I didn't really want to approach it. I just didn't know if it was a normal thing or not." Keegan said his grandmother had passed and left him the place.

 Now that he thought about it, it wasn't so great being a loner after all. He'd found he didn't like being alone in the dark in the country. But he'd made sure the locks worked. And he rummaged around the house, making sure it was safe.

"I did a good thing, right?" Keegan looked up at the guy who he knew would never be his friend.

"You did well, kid, it's just we're missing one person."

Keegan pressed his lips tight. He was keeping to his story. Damn straight. He slurped on his Pepsi until it was dry.

16 comments:

  1. Keegan is very nervous about the whole situation and seems a little depressed.

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  2. Stick to your story is always the advice from the wise ones.

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  3. Intriguing new character. Junie's mystery continues. Very interesting.

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  4. So the police now treats him like a suspect?

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  5. I feel sorry for Keegan. He helped, and now this. But the others are just doing their jobs too and have to ask about everything.

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  6. Keegan me parece um bom rapaz, só está um pouco perdido.
    Beijos nas bochechas! :-)

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    1. Keegan seems like a good guy to me, he's just a little lost.
      Kisses on the cheeks! :-) 💕❤️😉💗❤️💕Thanks!

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  7. Me gusta Keegan aunque tome pepsi. Te mando un beso.

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  8. People who add value to our lives are present through many actions and few words.
    (ꈍᴗꈍ) Poetic and cinematic greetings.
    💋Kisses💋

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  9. Sticking to your story is good advice. If you didn't do anything, there's no reason to feel guilty.

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  10. Ciekawym tytuł, jak zawsze...
    A kolejny rozdział czyta się z zainteresowaniem.
    Pozdrawiam serdecznie i zapraszam na moją rocznicową opowieść.

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  11. Keegan and others both sound right on their point of view right now
    I wonder if he is hiding something

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