I like my boyfriend to paint my toenails & I like to paint his, too.
I tend to lose bras easily.
I flirt when I'm nervous.
I seldom follow a crochet pattern.
I rarely ever wear two socks that match.
I'm obessed trying new things made from sunflowers.
She might look perfect, but Ellie is far from it. There are so many things she isn't good at. Cooking.Falling in love. Keeping a boyfriend. Being the friend she always thought she would be. Perhaps, she's her own worst enemy.
Over the past few years she's learned about love and hate and what it means to stay true to herself and to keep friendships from crumbling. Also the importance of family even when they don't always agree and perhaps aren't even blood related.
Ellie is a work in progress. She goes on.
umm..well, don't know if this was wise or not, but its a comment form from my other ellie story in progres. Only, its a different Ellie. Perhaps blogspot peeps will want to comment here.
ReplyDeleteCool. Nice that you set this up. I don't have a comment thing on my diaryland because I'm too cheap to buy a gold membership. LOL.
ReplyDeleteI like this story. A lot.
how this thing actually works? lol. i sound like an innocent or rather ignorant person. haha.
ReplyDeleteanyway, about the story and the old woman, it's somewhat eerie. lol. but can't wait to see the next scene. ^^
Um. Wow.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if you've ever read G.P. Taylor's work, particularly Tersias the Oracle, but there's a scene in that book that somewhat reminds me of this one. A whole other world past a portal in an alabaster box. All you have to do is climb through.
Nice work.
the otherside..can't wait for more.
ReplyDeleteinstead of tagging you i just spotlighted you on my blog.
ReplyDeleteI like this part a lot. Very spookishly.
ReplyDeletecool, a little creepy, but cool.
ReplyDeletelove the story
ReplyDeleteOooo. Freaky. I love it.
ReplyDeleteyuck, that does not sound like good food.
ReplyDeletecool like where its going
ReplyDeleteVery, very intriguing. I wonder what happens back in "the real world" where Evan is.
ReplyDeleteYeah, glad you go te car going.
ReplyDeleteooooops sorry I sounded drunk. Maybe my keyboard is a bit messed up. Sorry.
ReplyDeleteLIMBO!
ReplyDeleteI find it fascinating. I love this story.
Ever read Marcus Sanders' and Sandow Birk's version of Dante's Inferno? It's one of my favorite books. The art is absolutely spectacular, and that's not a compliment I hand out often.
Anyway, the point is, I find the afterlife and whatnot fascinating for whatever reason. And sort of exciting. Although I like coming up with theories, I don't particularly want to test them anytime soon. LOL.
Sorry for the long, rambling comment.
love love love the story man!
ReplyDeleteSigh. Poor Ellie.
ReplyDeleteYou've been tagged! cool story!
ReplyDeleteOk, keep writing. now.
ReplyDeleteI love it!
ReplyDeleteHA HA HA
ReplyDeleteThis totally cracked me up
hope they find some good stuff soon.
ReplyDeleteWow. I wonder why Evan decided to leave. Kate seems like she's hiding something.
ReplyDeleteWell, I made this Diaryland back in like May, I think. And I never used it. I think I just got sick of Blogspot. Sometimes you can just have too many options. LOL. And I missed writing, and since this is a little different, I decided to try it and see how it goes.