"I just don't get it?" Tammy winced. "Her father? Maddie's father is coming?" She shook her head and took another sip of Carol's truckstop coffee that might have been a little bitter, but it woke her up. She sat at Carol's dining table, where there were leftover muffins from the bakery. Muffins her own son Boone baked. She hated not eating and pulled at the oatmeal raisin, hoping she was staying healthy.
"Clearly, it will be interesting," Carol sighed. She looked tuckered to Tammy. The woman had been on her feet too much, but Carol cradled her coffee up in thought.
"I don't know why I'm so worried," Tammy fretted.
"Well, I don't think he's coming to stop the wedding?" Carol looked a bit surprised.
"I know. It's just. I hope she's OK. She-"
"What? She might need Zoloft by now?" Carol pondered.
"I don't even know if -" It made Tammy in a huff. They didn't need to go on about the state of mind of others. "A wedding takes a lot out of you." Mainly, it was just money for Tammy. But Naoki had been watchful about it. He was always there to help her with money matters. Even if they weren't on the same page about a lot of things. Although he seemed to be happy with Tyra.
Tammy looked blankly and her future in-laws. Of course, neither were concerned about a marriage for Naoki and Tyra. She knew it was mutual. They were both concerned about how they could stay friends if those two split. But at the moment, it seemed to be working.
"Look, we'll get through it. Maddie and Boone are getting married. We'll do what we can for that father of hers. Did she even say his name?" Carol wanted to know.
"No." Not that Tammy recalled.

oh dear
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad I never got married! x
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ReplyDeleteBefore weddings everyone is somehow tense
Thats what i thought too🙂
DeleteHope they survive the wedding.
ReplyDeleteHope everyone can have a good time.
ReplyDeleteOjala que todo vaya bien. Te mando un beso.
ReplyDeletewish good luck
ReplyDeleteI noticed you have changed your blog header my friend. The first blog header of yours is cute girl whose face lookalike Cameron DIaz, Charlie Angels
ReplyDeleteThe dialogue feels natural, especially Tammy’s fretting and Carol’s blunt comments. Its totally captures how family dynamics around weddings can stir up old nerves and unspoken fears. .
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ReplyDeleteI agree with the previous comments!
Weddings always bring some insecurity and fears about the couple's future, and this makes families nervous and creates a heavier atmosphere among everyone!
Thank you, Ellie, for your kind comments on my blog! They are always a boost of positive energy! Hugs
Other amazing post, like always
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your art with us
Sending hugs and love ♥
Przed ślubem zawsze czuje się niepewność. Rozmyślamy nad tym jak to będzie. Co nas czeka. Relacje z teściami po obu stronach też bywają trudne. Bardzo mi się podobają te dialogi pełne emocji. Narracja też fantastyczna.
ReplyDeleteTensions before big day sounds normal I think
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how the episode reveals everyone’s emotional state meanwhile 👍