Thursday, July 24, 2008

dust in the wind

"Its going to be a hot one," Aunt Maggie was looking out the front porch. She noticed the trail of dust coming in the wind toward the house. "Don't know this one, Ellie." She said quietly.

"What?" Ellie edge by the window to look out. She was in her cutoffs and barefooted. She wore a tank top under the smock apron that touched the tip of her cutoffs. Aunt Maggie hadn't asked her yet to get dressed, but then Aunt Maggie was giving her the look over at the moment. She fumed slightly but didn't say anything. She went back to the kitchen for another cup of coffee.

Ellie stood there watching. Her hair was a wreck. It didn't want to do anything. Her fringe bangs wouldn't do much but stick out the front of her head. She pulled the rest into a ponytail. She looked something frightful from the eighties. She wasn't wearing make up, either. She hadn't even put on any moisturizer for the day.

She watched the trail of dust go one way, then come back the other. She supposed someone was lost. But then the pickup truck headed up their road. Ellie kept staring. It looked familiar. The pick-up truck.

It couldn't be, she thought. A chill came over her as she waited. And then she saw him get out of the pick up. She backed away. Her teeth clinched. She needed to get a hold of herself as she licked her dry lips. If only she could take off running, she couldn't even find her flip-flops.

Rex was here.

12 comments:

  1. What will happen now? I love the idea that her hair is a mess and Rex shows up.

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  2. The suspense! Can't wait.

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  3. ok i'm new to this blog but i love the story! is it like one big book cuz thats awesome!!! now i just have to find time to go back and read them all! good think i've still go some summer days left! keep writing- ur on to something good!

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  4. Well, that's just funny. I'd probably take off running, too.

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  5. pooooooooooooooooooooost post post i want to know what happens next and no wonder eric looked familair

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  6. No friggin way! Rex??!! I cant wait 2 see what happens next! keep it up!
    XOXO Buh-Laire
    P.S. Sorry, i still cant get on MY blog, but for some reason i can get on urs. I'll let u know when i can get on mine again. Hopefully soon...

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  7. ooo, SUSPENSE BUILD UP! haha. can't wait to see what happens

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  8. ooohh, the suspense is killing me! Who is Rex?! Thanks for the comment! :)

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  9. hi this is my first time here... wt u r writing here is so cool!!

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  10. i'm going to the next immediately. lol. can't wait to see what happens next. this is getting more thrilling. woohoo. lol.

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